It needs a preloader. download one from here or go to youtube to learn simple actionscript.
you also need to work more with the animation and art.
The preloader, as I've been told, is a must have. I'll add one to my next one.
This was done quite awhile ago, and with a mouse, so the art is horrible. On paper though I'm an awesome artist, I even make my own comic! Thanks for the help man.
This is a great story idea, but the animation and art needs a lot more work.
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